Scary Mary by S. A. Hunter


Scary MaryScary Mary
by S. A. Hunter
Lulu.com, 2008
144 pages
ISBN: 978-1-84728-924-7
Print
Young Adult Fantasy

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Mary is living in teenager hell. Known to one and all as Scary Mary, she’s a social outcast and the brunt of all kinds of verbal abuse. You see, Mary not only hears ghosts, they become more active in her presence, causing all sorts of trouble. It doesn’t help that Mary is a fierce individual with a scorching tongue and an acid wit.

When Mary is befriended by a new boy at her high school , she can’t believe her good fortune. Which is probably a good thing, since the relationship quickly sours due to competition from the School’s reigning diva and a malevolent spirit.

What happens when Mary fights back is entertaining, and the entire novella races along–being written in the sparse style made famous by James Patterson.

S. A. Hunter wrote Scary Mary as a Young Adult Fantasy, so it doesn’t have the depth to make it satisfying for an adult. For what she intended, however, the story is finely crafted, solid entertainment.

The only suggestion I would make to the author is to remember that teenagers of today are much more knowledgeable and sophisticated than ever before: they demand and deserve a rich, complicated fantasy world. Write up to your audience, S. A. Hunter, not down. They will love you for it.

Copyright © Clayton Clifford Bye 2009

Ember: A dark retelling of Cinderella


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by Bettie Sharpe
Self-published
142 pages, Novella
Dark Fantasy
eBook, Print


Author’s Description:

Everyone loves Prince Charming. They have to—he’s cursed. Every man must respect him. Every woman must desire him. One look, and all is lost.

Ember would rather carve out a piece of her soul than be enslaved by passions not her own. She turns to the dark arts to save her heart and becomes the one woman in the kingdom able to resist the Prince’s Charm.

Poor girl. If Ember had spent less time studying magic and more time studying human nature, she might have guessed that a man who gets everything and everyone he wants will come to want the one woman he cannot have.

Charm is a Curse. Love is a Fire. This story is no fairytale…

Review:

Ember is a free eBook available at http://www.bettiesharpe.com/, although a print version is also available from Lulu.com. The author, Bettie Sharpe, says she wrote the novella for fun and to add content to her website. I’m so glad she did.

This dark and very adult retelling of Cinderella is the way fairy tales should be told. Ember has the kind of darkness reminiscent of the old Russian folk tale of Baba Yaga but it also has humour, light and a depth one just doesn’t find in fairy tales. I say, right on! Children and adults alike want stories about people they can imagine to be real, not flat caricatures; readers want to feel a true connection to storybook characters. This is exactly what Bettie Sharpe delivers.

A well written, entertaining read, Ember is the perfect selection for a stormy afternoon.


Warning: Graphic sex scenes


Copyright © Clayton Clifford Bye 2009