Scary Mary by S. A. Hunter


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by S. A. Hunter
Lulu.com, 2008
144 pages
ISBN: 978-1-84728-924-7
Print
Young Adult Fantasy

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Mary is living in teenager hell. Known to one and all as Scary Mary, she’s a social outcast and the brunt of all kinds of verbal abuse. You see, Mary not only hears ghosts, they become more active in her presence, causing all sorts of trouble. It doesn’t help that Mary is a fierce individual with a scorching tongue and an acid wit.

When Mary is befriended by a new boy at her high school , she can’t believe her good fortune. Which is probably a good thing, since the relationship quickly sours due to competition from the School’s reigning diva and a malevolent spirit.

What happens when Mary fights back is entertaining, and the entire novella races along–being written in the sparse style made famous by James Patterson.

S. A. Hunter wrote Scary Mary as a Young Adult Fantasy, so it doesn’t have the depth to make it satisfying for an adult. For what she intended, however, the story is finely crafted, solid entertainment.

The only suggestion I would make to the author is to remember that teenagers of today are much more knowledgeable and sophisticated than ever before: they demand and deserve a rich, complicated fantasy world. Write up to your audience, S. A. Hunter, not down. They will love you for it.

Copyright © Clayton Clifford Bye 2009

Twins of Darkness by Lisa Lane


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The Darkness and the Night 3: Twins of Darkness

by Lisa Lane
A Ravenous Romance™ Breathless™ Original Publication
Published: 2009-06-04
ISBN:  978-1-60777-145-6
eBook
217 pages
Erotic, paranormal (vampire) romance

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Karen is finding that being a mother, lover and a vampire is no walk in the park under moonlight. Her children, the fraternal twins Anna and Andy, must be protected from her terrifying past and constantly watched for signs of vampirism. Hard to do when you’re forced to sleep all day. Anna, although seemingly human, has the ability, like her mother, to travel the Astral. But she’s so much more than her mother knows. Her brother, Andy, appears to be a normal human boy, but as he reaches for manhood he, too, comes into his own.

With the help of her blood donor and lover, Jason, Karen does her best to offer the twins a “normal” suburban life. Despite this, the children fully exploit Anna’s abilities and become more and more aware of their family’s past.

Prepare yourself for a wild ride outside our reality, past our sexual mores, through love and sacrifice and, finally, back to the dreaded vampire commune featured in Lane’s previous novel in this series.

Twins of Darkness is the third book in the series The Darkness and the Night by Lisa Lane. Not having read the first two installments it took me about 40 pages to get into the novel. When I picked up the book again, I read it through in one sitting. This is an event. I have a disability which severely limits my attention span.

What’s so different about Twins of Darkness? Well… The author’s style makes for effortless reading; Lane’s novel is interesting, variable and complicated without the heaviness often associated with stories of substance, and she balances her many characters and plot lines like a master. Also, this is not your typical vampire story, and although there was enough sex to make my  temperature rise, the story is not just a vehicle for eroticism.

Yes, as another reviewer pointed out (in detail), there are editing and/or grammatical issues. But, and this is an important one, I was so drawn in by the story that I missed all but a few glaring spelling mistakes during my initial read. When an author can pull off such a feat, who gives a damn!

I would caution this author to make sure editing of her next book is stringent, but to otherwise keep doing what she’s doing. She has a definite voice and a wonderful imagination. Twins of Darkness stands out from the crowd.

Copyright © Clayton Clifford Bye 2009

Teen Angel by James Hartley


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Teen Angel
by James Hartley
PublishAmerica
ISBN: 1-4241-8510-6
170 pages
Fantasy
Print/eBook

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Angie is the girl whose tragic death was made famous by the song Teen Angel. Convinced her boyfriend still loves her, she decides to return to him as a very substantial ghost. But there’s a problem! Angie doesn’t have the skills to manipulate time properly and she misses her mark by thirty years. Her “Dickie” is balding, plump, married and has teenage daughters of his own. Stuck where she is, Angie decides she’ll just have to overlook the age difference and reclaim what is rightfully hers.

James Hartley has written an enjoyable romp which, for me, elicited memories of Robert Heinlein’s humorous jabs at popular morality. The story, although exhibiting a weak opening and an unsurprising end, was full of imaginative scenes. I could picture Hartley sipping on a coffee and writing with a twinkle in his eye.

Teen Angel is grammatically sound and free of the errors I’ve come to expect when reading self-published works. The author has a definite voice and style, and he knows how to entertain. As Hartley strikes me as a professional, I’m even willing to concede that my comment regarding the opening of the story could be a simple matter of preference. So, other than the sluggish end, this was a fine read for a lazy summer afternoon.

Warning:
Hartley’s uncomplicated writing style could easily lead a parent to pick up Teen Angel for a ‘tween. The content will not be considered appropriate (by many) for children of this age.

Copyright © Clayton Clifford Bye 2009